Scorpio Eye

I wrote a story about a Scorpio. The story has been in the works for some time, I am writing it for a publisher looking for Scorpio stories. Now, I seem to attract Scorpio men - their eyes tell it all - if a Scorpio who wants you, when he looks at you his eyes send fire. For real.

But, the Scorpios of my past have been in my past for a while. So I haven't thought about them or their ways in a while (but they have some interesting ways). Anyway, while writing this story, I decided to look up the Scorpio horoscope to get a better character analysis and draw out a more realistic story. While I don't believe "in" horoscopes, I glance at them from time to time. So, before I submitted the story about this raw Scorpio man that turned my main character's world (and body) inside out, I did a character check. This is what I found:

Magnetic, elusive, sexy and determined. That’s you Scorpio!....That cool aloofness is just the surface of your complex nature, and is by no means bad. Below the surface of your cool exterior is a scorching and passionate fire. You know it and others sense it too...You turn heads whenever you walk into a room — you are the strong, silent type, and you have a magnetic aura...It’s well known astrologically that the eyes of a Scorpio can hypnotise. Whether you know it or not, this is your most powerful physical trait.

Well damn. Ain't that some horoscope. And, let me tell you, its right on point. Scary how accurate it is, actually. And the character I wrote, was just like this, and his eyes were the center of the story. I didn't do it on purpose - I just took their premise (romance based on November-Topaz) and ran with it. And created a raw, sensual, sexy, promising, beautifully sculpted, fully accurate Scorpio.

Now, my horoscope on the other hand- Virgo - read as boring as paint drying. It didn't talk about any of the fire of a Virgo, just spoke about being organized (which I am not), clean (which I definitely am) and annoying to everyone but the Virgo mind (which, I probably am). But what about the Virgo passion, the Virgo strength and eyes that hypnotise? Don't I have some passion, some alluring trait that keeps bringing these Scorpios my way. Or are Virgos really just analytical thinkers and is my so called "passion" a figment of my imagination?

Hmph. I am pretty sure I can match a Scorpio's passion any day.

Either way, I just had to share that horoscope and take a minute to think of my past Scorpio "friends" whose eyes certainly hypnotised. Or whose eyes I avoid to this day, so I don't get into trouble. LOL

I hope the story gets published so I can share it with you, and let you determine whether I properly summarized the Scorpio man and whether you think my story is entertaining. Until them, I will keep on writing and avoiding those hypnotic Scorpion eyes...